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Tui Shan Thomas
wintec music dept
Hi pat just wanted to say thankyou so much for coming to lecture at our course you are very inspiring and Ive learnt a great deal about the songwriting process sadly i was unable to purchase your book and even more sad was that someone stole it from our library only 2 weeks after it arrived! I have put a request in for another one however it's gonna take weeks to get here i cant wait to read it. Im really looking forward to your return and your next lecture it was wonderful to have met you. I'm a big fan!! Take care love from New Zealand!!
Frank Costa
Toms River NJ
Pat, this is my virginal run with your material. I've been playing primarily bass guitar for over 40 years. Half of that time, I've been writing songs. I've learned more in just the beginning pages of your WBL 2nd addition book than I have in all my years as a writer. I plan on taking your online course or the 2 day seminar. If these few beginning pages of your book is just a taste of whats to come, it will bring me closer to perfecting my craft. Looking forward to taking your seminar in the tri-state area. Thanks for the education....Regards....Frank C.
Joseph Coker
Copenhagen, Denmark
Hey Pat,
I am an American songwriter living in Copenhagen, Denmark. I have played music for a while but am just branching out in my music career. I am in the process of finishing an album I started in January. I just wanted to say how thankful I am for the material you have produced! I first came in contact with your offerings from the online lyric course I took with Andrea Stolpe. Your books, especially the Essential Guide to Lyric Form and Structure, have been such a help to me in my development. I hope you meet you and thank you in person some day. Until then I just wanted to remind you how many people your teaching is helping. Thanks so much!
I am an American songwriter living in Copenhagen, Denmark. I have played music for a while but am just branching out in my music career. I am in the process of finishing an album I started in January. I just wanted to say how thankful I am for the material you have produced! I first came in contact with your offerings from the online lyric course I took with Andrea Stolpe. Your books, especially the Essential Guide to Lyric Form and Structure, have been such a help to me in my development. I hope you meet you and thank you in person some day. Until then I just wanted to remind you how many people your teaching is helping. Thanks so much!
Just a little prairie girl...
Stonewall, Manitoba
Pat, it's been almost 2 years since I had the pleasure of attending a workshop with you, Kathy M. and Stephen. Not a day goes by when I don't think about what I learned and how much it has helped me grow as a songwriter. People seem to enjoy cover songs I sing now but love the ones that I proudly call my own. Thanks agian! You are a such a great teacher and have done so much for so many.
Annette Brown
Annette Brown
Getting Songs Recorded in Nashville
Nashville,TN
Being a experienced writer people are always asking, "How do I get better?. I just tell them to get Pat's book "Writing Better Lyrics" and do what it says. To get your songs recorded they need to stand out from the pack. Nashville is full of "GOOD" songs but they only record "GREAT" songs. I know, I know, not all songs recorded in Nashville are great but those writers have a track record and you don't. Your songs have to stand out. Make them great.
Rod Hermanson
Alberta Canada
I'm inspred everytime I listen to you teach. Words were just words untill I was given the tools needed to make them shine. Thanks Pat!
Vince West
Stockton, CA
I attended the January 09' workshop at the American Film Institute. Most recently I saw you but had no time to speak with you at in the Weston, LAX just in November. You were leaving the resturaunt mid afternoon on Sunday and looked directly at me and I smiled... Esther and I will be attending again January 30 & 31, 2010' in L.A.
Currently, I'm taking critique classes in Seskins home in Richmond, CA and I advance daily resulting from regular study and the constant writing and showcasing of material at various venues here in the west. Thank You Pat, for all you do for the writers and creators of music! Your gifts and ideas are priceless and treasured by all whom I've met gaining from your instruction.
Currently, I'm taking critique classes in Seskins home in Richmond, CA and I advance daily resulting from regular study and the constant writing and showcasing of material at various venues here in the west. Thank You Pat, for all you do for the writers and creators of music! Your gifts and ideas are priceless and treasured by all whom I've met gaining from your instruction.
Marina Stehle
Australia, Melbourne
Thanks so much for your feedback on my song at the Melbourne workshop, you opened my eyes to see my songs with more clarity and persepective. I re-recorded it, and since then have been much more critical with my lyrics, and slowed down my song-writing process by standing back from the lyrics and thinking for a while as if critiquing an artwork before deciding it is finished. Am still learning though, and have put your lyric writing books on my Christmas list:)
Thanks so much for being so artful with your lyrical teachings.
Thanks so much for being so artful with your lyrical teachings.
Tiara searle
Craig,Co
just reading other peoples comments, and reading the tips given on this site has total changed my prospective on song writing. I have never taken a class with Pat but i plan to use his tips to become a more affective songwriter.
Kerri Elimeleck
Berklee College of Music
I've had 3 classes with Pat so far this semester, and already I am noticing my lyric writing improve drastically. I have never met a teacher so willing to share their own ideas and thoughts about such a useful topic. Looking forward to a great semester :)
Jerry/Changed Forever!
McKinney, TX
Thanks again for the tools you gave me when you and Jon were in Richardson. In a teachers meeting this year, we were asked to jot down a few ideas concerning a "hero" in our lives. I wrote a short essay in 3 min. using every sense and memory of my paramedic son-in-law who had tragically died. When I read my essay to the other teachers, sobs and sniffles drifted across the room. Thanks for giving me the tools to share the beauty of his life with others.
Thank you from Auckland - New Zealand
Auckland City Hospital
Dear Pat, You have challenged and honed my appreciation and thinking of song writing in the two short days you were here. Thank you for taking time out for us and leaving NZ song writers in a stronger place to write and express ourselves to the planet. Enjoy Michael.D.Daysh
Keiran Lond
Aucks, NZ
Cheers Pat,
I shouldve hit 121 with you guys but i'm at home re-writing by the gas heater. Cheers Mainz & co for putting on a great weekend.
KL
I shouldve hit 121 with you guys but i'm at home re-writing by the gas heater. Cheers Mainz & co for putting on a great weekend.
KL
Ben Hooper
Brisbane Australia
Hi Pat,
Just a quick note to say hi and thanks for the great insight you gave me into songwriting last weekend. It has given me a refreshing look at the use of the english language and its relationship to song. You could say i feel much more "STABLE" about my songwriting! LOL
HOO ROO. Ben
Just a quick note to say hi and thanks for the great insight you gave me into songwriting last weekend. It has given me a refreshing look at the use of the english language and its relationship to song. You could say i feel much more "STABLE" about my songwriting! LOL
HOO ROO. Ben
John Rodriquez Says Thank You
Brisbane
Hi Pat,
Thanks for the really useful ideas you shared last night at the workshop. You have given me a whole new toolbox to choose from when writing songs. I feel much more empowered now. You can see what I have been doing at my website at singchronicity.net and I will follow up with you later to hear where I have gone to! Thanks so much!
Thanks for the really useful ideas you shared last night at the workshop. You have given me a whole new toolbox to choose from when writing songs. I feel much more empowered now. You can see what I have been doing at my website at singchronicity.net and I will follow up with you later to hear where I have gone to! Thanks so much!
Tatiana
Perth
Hi Pat
Really Looking forward to your Friday nights session here in perth. Could you Bring along resources for me to purchase?
Really Looking forward to your Friday nights session here in perth. Could you Bring along resources for me to purchase?
THANK YOU FROM PARIS
Paris FRANCE
Thank you from a french autodidacte in Paris who try to write songs.
Thank you for your book.
Cordialement.
Didier
Thank you for your book.
Cordialement.
Didier
Mike Bobbitt
Dallas Texas
Thanx to Mr P,
you meant so much to me
Now that I've been set free.
To be unstable ...fearlessly.
you meant so much to me
Now that I've been set free.
To be unstable ...fearlessly.
VincentDavid Limas
Stockton,CA
Pat, having all your materials. doing every exercise, cover to cover and doing the 10min. exercises each morning since december 08' has been life changing. I write a song subject content from the subconscience in 10min. approximately, from way down deep, and then, do the structural changes that the body reveals using the rhyming, mosaic, inside, near rhyme, etc.. phonetic order, every tool you've prescribed for the song writer in my senses, confirms the effect your teaching is having on song craft. It's as big as the first printed text was on civilizations. I will "forever" be grateful to you and Steve Seskin, celebrating your names and the women who bore you, each January in rememberance of the Hollywood Film Institute Workshop Jan.09'. Respectfully, Earnestly Vincent/ Esther, Until the next session! GREAT JOY!
Kellie Lee/suswa
st. george utah/dixie college
Hi Pat!
I just wanted to thank you for teaching lyric writing class the weekend of March 27th in St. George! The class was great and informative and made me want to learn more!
I just wanted to thank you for teaching lyric writing class the weekend of March 27th in St. George! The class was great and informative and made me want to learn more!
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